Your pictures give me something to gain.
I've read all your secrets, in between the lines are the best kind.
Living dangerously fast is only fun for so long.
We used to sit on your porch, I would smoke, you would take long sips from your flask.
Live fast && die beautiful is all you've ever wanted.
Love was something that would get in the way.
I'll take you anyway I can get you.
Long cemetary drives && sitting on the hood of your old chevy,
Talking and laughing about morbid fantasies.
Live life && don't hold back, thats what you taught me.
So here I am holding out my heart, that I've torn from my chest
I'm just waiting for you to preform the correct surgeries
To make it fit perfectly with yours.
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option #2
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Comments
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Every line of this was amazing.
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This is true:
Live life and don't hold back
Sick yet sweet
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"Love was something that would get in the way.
I'll take you anyway I can get you."
I like this, it's simply told and that's what makes it so effective. Also, the 'surgeries' bit is clever.
Good luck and thanks for entering! <3
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