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forever ours

the soft touch of a brush
a painting so elegant
it can't be real

an innocent lullaby
sang by an angel
the song comes to life

a person so gorgeous
even a field of roses fades
by your beauty

here I'm standing before you
asking you to be my safe haven
never to keep our love as a secret
let me be a blessing in your life
allow me to fill your heart with joy
be mine now and I'm yours
forever

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  • KhaosFury
    July 15, 2007
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    Wow, very cute. Good Luck!
    ~Cosmic


  • Regenhart
    July 13, 2007

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    kinda.. mushy for your taste. melig, if you get what I mean. zemelig

    but yeah, it's good writing

    kussie