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Romancing Flutter

Missing image
Flutter,
dancing grassland,
color weaving meadow,
wanded creatures wrapped in windy
pollen,
motion's monarchs migrating muse
as whispering dreamscapes
romancing lips,
flutter.









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  • azure85 gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    Thisis so beautiful the alliteration enhances the wonderment of each word written. You have done an excellent job with your butterfly cinquain, thank you so much.


  • acqua
    July 9, 2007

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    so beautiful, simply beautiful, has that gentle magical feel of butterflies and the imagery is wonderous, good luck in the contest and all the best!~

  • quakietree
    July 6, 2007
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    Nice alliterations.
    Good luck in the contest.
    qt


  • klassy lassy
    July 5, 2007

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    aagghh! translucent, gossamer grace ephemeral. The alchemy of meadows and moonlight in deepening blue, the magic of poetry in motion...


  • Night Hope gold member
    July 4, 2007
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    "motion's monarchs migrating muse
    as whispering dreamscapes"

    Beautiful, my Friend...You know how I like my flutterbyes, Scribe...Such wondrous words to weave wildness without waning whispers...Good luck in the contest, Sweetie... Wanda

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