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- Natural Born Radiance -

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Influential eyes watched
as a single voice
was placed in nature’s liqueur
for inspiration.

Sun and Moon paid their respects-

For a cycle of twenty one days,
Elementals coveted this sound
which rumbled underneath
brought forth prelude to a Dream.

Tiny fragile limbs stretched
from its organic pod;
extended to praise
the horizon above.

Every twenty one days-

whispers floated~ another voice birthed
and greeted with celestial welcome.

The Seasons left their flavors
on the skins of each new arrival
with a spritz of floral fragrance
to accentuate natural born radiance.




   

 

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  • Arkbear gold member
    July 9, 2007

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    Whoa!!!!!

    Yup!

     

    GOLD for sure!!

     

    Hey wait....* Bear runs over and looks

    at the name on the Gold Trophy......

     

    damn! *

     

    hehe

     

    A splendid write of imagery splendor ~

     

    I just love it when I can at least

    get NEAR your writes in finals..

     

    ...hehe ~

     

    ....and look who won Silver!!

     

    Treason!!!!!!!!!!!

     

    LMAO!

     

    Great write Dear...>>>

     

    The Seasons left their flavors
    on the skins of each new arrival
    with a spritz of floral fragrance
    to accentuate natural born radiance.

    So lovely!!!!!

    Brother Bear ~

     


  • Ryno
    July 9, 2007

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    A very powerfully descriptive idea. I love this piece, it is full of strong and inspirational imagery... your phrasing is crazy good... an awesome write and take on the prompt. Thank-you so much for your entry!


    Ryan


  • MotherMachineGunn
    July 6, 2007

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    Am in AWE

    I was very surprised at the direction this took. It kept my mind busy and full of beautiful pictures. Wonderful dialect and splendid story. I'm bookmarking this! Thank you most kindly for sharing this one with us. Good Luck in the contest as well.

    ~MotherMachineGunn~

    A few of my favorite lines:

    "placed in nature’s liqueur"
    "brought forth prelude to a Dream"
    "The Seasons left their flavors"
    "accentuate natural born radiance."

    Powerfully descriptive. I can't help but think
    of Earnest Hemingway. Again, good luck and congrats on a
    captivating piece of literature.


  • soulfultia gold member
    July 5, 2007

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    Quite pleasing to the eyes and mind Missy! Wonderful work on this piece. Beautiful imagery and a lovely soft flow of words to captivate us Love it Just what my evening ordered! ha! ~tia


  • HeavenScent4U
    July 5, 2007

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    wow this is a beautiful piece of work my dear full of imagery that is very pleasing to the eye...i too read this twice and it just got better

    be well and be blessed


  • penman gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    Excellent

    Oh my this is powerful. Best of luck in the contest precious.


  • StarEyes
    July 4, 2007

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    I had to sit here and look at the picture for a minute before reading, and then read this twice, and wow!!!!! The images were amazing!! What a great job! Best of luck in the contest!

    and much love

    Nettie


  • Amera gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    Wow! You brought the picture to life in your own wonderful style. Your fluid flow and your verbiage is outstanding. I read this twice and got different images each time. Well done!


    Love,
    Amera ♥

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