Lost In Shadows

I do not live in the light any longer
thriving only in the dark
Waiting for you to feast on me
to satisfy your hunger
Trying to fulfill all your needs
so you seek not another

My will is not my own
You are in complete control
I live to please you
to survive in your darkness

Belonging to the night
Forbidden fruit is what
sustains our lost souls

Not able to exist alone
I search for you in the shadows
hoping you will hear my
needful pleas and come to me

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soulfultia
July 5, 2007
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An intriguing penning Seems a bit dark, but for me sad kind of as it feels she is sacrificing only to please someone in hopes it will keep their attention away from others. So the "relationship" feels doomed, that is where the dark comes in for me ~Tia
Lonewolf2008
July 5, 2007

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very interesting
I hope as she search in the shadows, she does not find a real demon of a human, that would harm her. Very nice.
Heavenly Angel
July 4, 2007

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Wow!
This is so deep; so dark and with a mysterious air!
VERY well done, my friend!
Much enjoyed this!
All the best!!!!
Jeremy0826
July 4, 2007

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This is a wonderful write you have
penned here and I really enjoyed reading
it! The imagery and emotions in this
are great. I love how you put this all
together. A lost soul branded by the
darkness. Well done and thanks a lot
for sharing this one here! Keep up the
great work!

Jeremy0826
Amera
July 4, 2007

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This is wonderful, you slipped into the skin of the dark genre and you wear it well. Great flow and intonation. The image is erotic. lol, kind of turned me on.

Love,
Amera ♥