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Amorous Ambling(Butterfly Cinquain)

Walking
Down Lover's Lane
With the gal I adore
Who could ask for anything more
We stop
We hug, we kiss then walk once more
With happiness galore
More love in store
We walk.

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  • azure85 gold member
    July 14, 2007

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    This is so sweet! What a lovely haiku, and you can never ask for me then your sweetie beside you! Well done, poet!

  • quakietree
    July 6, 2007

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    I don't know much about cinquain so I appreciate reading your poem.
    This is so sweet. I hope you wrote it with someone specific in mind.
    Good luck in the contest.
    qt