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Gorgeous gala

  Gorgeous garden surroundings
    Where silence rules the roast
      and velvet roses with silky sheen
      Gently brush my cheeks
      Singing an elegant  lullaby like song
      The softness feels the innocence of my love
    Under the moonlit night’s brightness.

Assuming that the planet of earth as haven for angels                       
~Mysterious but a cryptic message
flashed secretly into my soul making my
life's selection of you My dear!  a lovable one

             
           

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gentle brushing of gorgeous thoughts

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  • KhaosFury
    July 15, 2007
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    Awww. Very sweet! x]
    ~Cosmic


  • natchstucco
    July 13, 2007

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    Yes

    Love under the stars is a memorable one. Nice write. I like the imagry portrayed here .good luck on the contest.


  • Intravenous Jesus
    July 5, 2007

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    Wow, beautiful. This is really one of the best poems I have read on here! I am definately going to keep an eye out for more from you!(but it isn't showing your name...grr) Anyeay, you rock!


    • Purush
      July 5, 2007
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      THANK YOU

      Thank you for the cordial comments
      always yours
      purush
      supani123@yahoo.com