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Santa Maria

at dawn, the doves wake
and the still air is filled
with sounds of their love

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  • Samantha Amergirdol
    August 12, 2007
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    A beautiful and concise description of nature... well done! Thanks for entering!

  • star wars fanatic
    July 10, 2007

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    Oh, very nice. Is Sants Maria a town? Sounds very romantic and beautiful. Keep up the great work, poet!


  • soulfultia gold member
    July 7, 2007

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    This reaches out to the senses, the magic of the haiku, few words but always delivering imagery and magic ~Tia


  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    July 5, 2007
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    ooo...me likey...short and filled with greatness!


  • The Burning Year
    July 5, 2007
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    I imagine wonderful colors..and the sounds wings make..projecting love and things...
    it's beautful

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