remember the days when we was young
playing hide and seek
and knock a door run
dancing in the street
and sneaking off for fags
eventually that changed and we were sneaking off with lads!
we were inseperable, attached at the hip
even sharing holidays and every weekend trip
staying at your house
having our midnight snacks
watching music videos
and having our girlie chats.
then we started dating guys and driving round in cars
going to blackpool just for doughnuts
and the moors to look at the stars.
getting in trouble with the police and finally leaving school
we started to grow apart abit
but our friendship remained cool.
now its 5 years later
and you have got a son
i am pregnant also about to be a mum
although we didnt talk for a while
we are great friends once again
and though we've both aged physically
theres not that much thats changed!!
we still laugh hysterically when watching men try to dance
and spend all day smoking and talking about lads
you have helped me out alot recently
by simply beiing a friend
and it just goes to show its true what they say when you have found your friend till the end
Author notes
this is a poem written for my friend marie. when we were growing up we were very close but lost touch for about 5 years. we recently met up again and she has been a great help and a good friend.it was great how we just clicked back together and got along so well and i want to say thankyou.
A contest entry
- Pay it forward - the real thing by Dienush.
1800 points, ended August 6, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sweet,
Nice to meet up with old friends, and you can always tell when they're true blue..Like ya said, it's like ya started right where ya left off.
Thanks for sharing, and all the best in the contest!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~ -
Well, I must say as a poem this wasn't exactly the style I was expecting and some spelling and grammar stuff was pretty off, but it is a gift of friendship after all so I hope your friend reads this and likes the message and appreciates your feelings. Thanks for entering my contest.
~Diana
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