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Intertwined









Initiation of the dawn
New day destined if living to see it is in-kind
Tempted by fate as resolve
Embracing the coming
Reinforced belief comes from us
Tested by preconditioned might
What of a day with no sunlight
Initiation of dawn
Nestles itself away until tomorrow comes
Embracing the coming
Dutiful daydreams dissolve














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  • thelordreigns gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    Beautiful

    This is a lovely acrostic. The old and the new do "embrace" in unity.

    Thanks so much for entering my contest.

    Hugs - joanne