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For my queen

Forgive my mind
My lust and twisted brain
I'm so fucked
Forgive me for not understanding you
I really want to love you so much and cherish you
I'm just so scared of everything because of myself
I want to hold on

Sometimes I cry when I think of us
Thoughts of having you beside me
Your arms around me
Your heart beating close to mine

Then my head switch so fast
And I'm completely more crazy
Oh I just want to die instantly everytime these things happen
Oh I'm so paranoid

Trying to find meaning in this lost reasons
I'm forever dead
All I can do is feel your touch
Burn
Fade
My death

Listen to you
Tell you it'll be okay
Make you happy more

Forgive me for every pain that I caused you

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  • Beverlynohime
    October 17, 2007

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    Sadness and frustration with a hint of love. This poem is an interesting mix. But like always Amazing! You're such a good writer Antonio! ^_^


  • fallenangel671
    July 5, 2007

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    aww this is such a sad poem but i loved this, it was such an amazing poem and i loved this,
    my favorite part would have to be:
    Trying to find meaning in this lost reasons
    I'm forever dead
    All I can do is feel your touch
    Burn
    Fade
    My death

    Listen to you
    Tell you it'll be okay
    Make you happy more

    Forgive me for every pain that I caused you
    i loved the emotions in this and i hope everything works out ok for you
    keep writing


    ~Ashley~<3