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oh this is wonderful, full of cosmic imagery and metaphor[ metaphors to time sand/illusion/cosmis objects], wonderful word choices carry the narration very well;so very well done...best of luck in Lynda's contest...PK
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such sentiment woven in your words...this is very nice...very full of questions but very hopeful at the same time. best of luck in the contest....be well and be blessed
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This chemistry of the cosmos
strange, yet real ;
our mutual destiny
beautiful
specially the way of taking words , in such sudden theme,
i liked it alot
by
the poet of hearts and beauitful words
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this is beautifully done...So much magic in this!
Thoughts to ponder and so wonderfully you have expressed them!
Lynda
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We can wait for the answers woven in someone elses time or create our own. You have the world at your finger tips. Love, Tom B.
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TomisB:
I thank you for your review and the comments on same, you and your comments are indeed appreciated.....
Love always your friend forever,
AngelicMistress...Tanya
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As I read this piece, I found myself lost in your every word. Even now as I write this comment I keep finding myself reflecting back on this poem, feeling its inner meaning. Your poetry really does have an effect on me. I go back and re-read it and only fine it reaching inside me as I can relate to this poem on such a very personal level. It says so much and yet how it feels is so much more.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest...
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Thank You!!!!!
Ed:
Thank you for your review and your comments on my works. They are truly appreciated.....
Be blessed my dear sweet Passionate Knight.....
AngelicMistress...Tanya
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