Written By Lisa Morris
My eyes still cry the tears tonight
My heart still full of pain
My soul feels such emptiness
And I'm standing in the rain
The realm of love I felt for you
Devoured my broken heart
You couldn't see what you meant to me
And you ripped my world apart
I cannot keep on loving you
It can never be like before
You abused the fabric of my love
But that made me want you more
I tried to give you everything
I gave you all I had
That still wasn't good enough
And the love we shared went bad
Now I sit here and I suffer
Because your heart is cold as ice
You went and left my heart to bleed
And my soul was sacrificed
Today I'll watch the sun go down
And watch the colors break apart
The pain alive inside my soul
Comes from my broken heart
Author notes
My name is Lisa Morris and, I love writing poetry. This one describes a time long forgotten. Sometimes you just have to draw the line between Love and pain. DarkestAngel68
A contest entry
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525 points, ended July 8, 2007, 17 entries
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I loved it, you show a strong passion in your writings, the flow was amazing too, you really caught my attention with the emotion expressed in this poem, I enjoyed reading this alot.
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Very nice write. And yes, I agree, sometimes you do have to draw the line between love and pain. It's hard to do, because sometimes that line is blurred and you can't see it because love has blinded you.
Great write and thanks for entering!
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this is agreat poem...it causes me pain to read...as i just this second drew that line with my boyfriend...and broke up with him...so this poem really does have a place in my heart...one that will mend with only time
thnx for entering and good luck in my contest
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that can be a hard line to draw sometimes. This was a wonderful poem that speaks of loss and sadness. Very well written.
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