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Rather than let you touch them

When b*e*a*t*i*n*g your unborn  child
from }inside{ yourself
is the only option,
     

      We,ep

Do the deed,
and prey you're next--->

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No idea how to write this style, but this is what bubbled out of my brain.

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  • Nobody Royale silver member
    July 4, 2007

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    WoW

    I love the title...very nice write...the last two lines are my favorite..'Do the deed, and prey you're next--->'...love the use of prey as well...good job and good luck in the contest...