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Praise.

A year:  One year of hours spent in eachothers arms
yet it seems like a lifetime ago that your Jack Sparrow grin
and quiet way changed my world.
(I guess opposites really do attract)

Soul meets soul on lovers’ lips
and your arms about my waist
keep me safe and dry in this world of razors and raindrops.

There is no place I'd rather be than here
on a deflating air mattress in the back of your truck
talking about our hopes and dreams beneath the stars.
Feeling my skin bristle and burn
as your fingers trace the outline of my face
and I fall asleep as you whisper sweet nothings in my ear.

I've found my happily ever after
and the pieces of me shattered long ago, begin to mend
with every kiss
every caress
every probing glance over the glow of a Canada Day bonfire.
I have fallen in love with the simple things in life
(little things you do)

Finally I have stopped waiting for the bottom to drop out:
Lover, I have found my other half in you...
May one year become a lifetime of sunsets, underwater kisses, and handholds in a crowd
as the "I do" daydreams play with every beat of my heart.

(thank-you for helping me believe again)

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  • psychiatrists dream
    December 6, 2007
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    very beautiful poem, well written.thanks for entering and good luck!


  • rendezvous
    November 21, 2007
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    This is so very beautiful. I raise my glass to finding Hope again...

    jen


  • BrightEyd Anarchist
    October 13, 2007
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    Awwwww this is so sweet! I'm glad you have found that happiness in your life Kris! *hugs*


  • Vorondwen gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    Awwww

    I couldn't be more happy for you!


  • FashionCorEmoRanger
    August 22, 2007

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    I love how perfect your feelings come out in your poetry. This poem is beautiful.
    I love the last line.


  • TrulyLoothy
    July 16, 2007
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww


  • Nikki Durant
    July 7, 2007

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    YAY! I am so happy for you. I know how long it takes for the many blistered pieces of a heart to mend. I'm so happy that you finally found what you were looking for. That makes two of us. <3 Nikki


  • Rivkah Lynn
    July 4, 2007
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    This is awesome.. I am so happy for you. *hugs* I am not sure I really have words for this poem because it is so intimate. All I can say is that you expressed what was in your heart so beautifully, and I feel like I can relate to it so well. Keep living, keep loving.. and for the love of all that is holy don't let him go!


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 4, 2007
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    Thank you for your beautiful write spoken straight form the heart to your beloved, Josephine


    • theprodigalsister
      July 4, 2007
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      Well thank-you Josephine for the kind words & the contest I'm always glad to find new ways to show my love for him...

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