Lying amongst broken floorboards,
covered in dust and misguided intentions,
with forever written in cracking tongues
and vermillion tainted fingers,
"ever-after" was consumed...
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I'm sorry, I may delete this and enter a different piece if I can come up with anything
>.< damn muse
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A contest entry
- Show me your best Dirty Pretty by Nobody Royale.
500 points, ended July 6, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Much dust imagained as fingers do, gliding a written word of scribble in it as a call for help. the vermillion is most probably rage, that one red which is deep within. Lying on floorboards but not remotely able to help oneself, that I'd call totally defeated. Very deep indeed.
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this is awesome dolly!!
no deleteing or ill have to fly over to you && kick your pretty little ass!
ILY princess
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Well hell, maybe it's worth deleting it if you promise to come see me if I do
LY babe
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I do love your pretty words. Vermillion. Lovely <3
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Don't delete it,its dam good..love the "covered in dust and misguided intentions.." well put..been there and back and found no "happily ever after" Good lcuk!
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very nice...I liked the imagery of 'vermillion tainted fingers' thank you for your entry and good luck..
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