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Holding on


I will Forever LOvE You

I will FoReVer CaRe

I will FoReVeR lIvE MY life Wishing YoU Were There.......


and as for long as I live I will neva WaLk AwAY

aS long as YoU Promise me one thing rIght heRre todAy

If YoU Come to Me.. YoU wiLl stAy

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Written September 7th, 2000

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  • sweetgurl
    August 20, 2003
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    Wow....deffinetly a unique poem here...but I really like it.
    Great job! So much said with powerful meaning in so little words.
    God Bless and thanks for sharing!

    ~sweetgurl