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how you used to be...

Have you ever...?
Missed someone so desperately
when they were right by your side?

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  • blue20bunny
    July 10, 2007
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    powerful

    this is such a truthful write that many people can relate to..i know exactly how you feel. you have said so many words with your heart through this write. this is a great write.thank you for allowing me to read and comment on your work. and thank you very much for the comment on mine..


  • Exodus gold member
    July 4, 2007
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    Haha
    They're infecting AllPoetry!
    This is wonderful, sad, but wonderful, well done


  • Isabel Cult
    July 4, 2007
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    I have. So many times. Stunning piece <3