Flirting the shadows of reality
Flickering the arrows of time
Forming our shape of vanity
Filtering our soul at a shrine
They’re in quest of the wisdom of nowhere
Is it when we look high in the sky
Inventing the salvation of a mighty knight
Is it beyond where the eagles fly
Inquiring our redemption within the almighty insight
They’re in quest of the wisdom of nowhere
Calling after the eco of the Deliverer
Confining the wings of the years
Covering the bared creation laborer
Crooning the iniquity of the seers
They’re in quest of the wisdom of nowhere
Now I’m making the step fro and developing,
What had been mold by the dawn of times
Now I’m trusting a more refined thinking
Of what had been instinct beliefs and lines
Now I’m clarifying the nowhere from the unknown
So that HIS wisdom may have its new dawn.
A contest entry
- Rhyming Ramblings by piccola.
700 points, ended July 20, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The wisdom of nowhere; seems like a foolish quest. Looking in vain for the wisdom of the world? this is thought provoking and I like the rhyme thanks for this entry.
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thks or your comment! u should check my other poems and tell your opinion
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and thus the wisdom of nowhere lies actually within our minds...
incredibly thought-provoking this is !
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thks man, that's what was this poem all about. honestly i have another point of view than the mind thing, but in all and for all, all what we really have is our minds
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uffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
ktir hek ya zalame, easy easy
honestly, u blowed my..................... mind.lol
its just awsome, 2 more months and il b waiting for ur book to b a best selling.
peace, keep on penning.
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hey that's toooo generous! btw i believe that the best selling book should be printed after ones death. til then... i'll keep penning
thks
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kel poem a7la men el tenyeh ya zalameh mesh 3am la7e2lak heik so deep so philosophical in a way as usual i love the way u rhyme it never eats up d content and that is mighty from u
They’re in quest of the wisdom of nowhere
simplify it all amazing dude
and well if u dnt see my comment next time not cz i dont want to read it is cz i'll be away so goodbye my friend and u always make my day with ur awesome poems
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hey! wein ray7a w terektina... anyway bannout don't go so long, we'll b missing you here take good care of urself w thks 3al comment as usual ur comments are how wow!
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