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A Heart is Freed!

I see you and I shiver,
My heart begins to pound,
My knees begin to quiver,
Then I fall to the ground.

Everytime you smile,
I need to stop and breathe,
I’m in heaven for a while,
It’s only you I need!

I look into your eyes,
What I see I cannot believe,
I’m captivated in this moment,
My heart is finally freed!

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  • KhaosFury
    July 15, 2007
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    Nicely done! good luck!
    ~Cosmic