He's the compilation of all my innocent days co-joined
The scratch to my itch
The fellow comrade in my ditch
My inner ear with words of escape
When the world delivers it's rape
My solitary tune that swirls my world
My Tsunami of delights
My intelligence gatherer
That floods me with insight
To insure proper flight
The one who holds my hand
Who strains to get me; to understand
All the while knowing I don't do 'demand'
He sings to me, when nothing else will do
To lift me, when I'm colored sad and blue
He's all these things and so much more
He's who I live and breathe for
Comfort shoe, easing me through
Navigator, regulator, manipulator
Delicate balancing act to
Keep me from being derailed
Words are folly when all's said and done
But, you're my smile, joy and my fun
Author notes
In dedication to Victor.
In a list
A contest entry
- She's a fingertip's swirl in an ocean... by tara wilson.
900 points, ended July 13, 2007, 10 entries
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"He's the compilation of all my innocent days co-joined"
I really like that line...I would have liked to have seen more about this!
Thank you so much for this entry!
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You liked my longest line. hahhaha Thanks for this review.
It's kind of hard writing about someone so close to you. It was a challenge. smile lol
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very loving and loyal .someone out there is a superman,,they are hard to find, delicious reading
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Thank you Peter, for your humourous comment. lol
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a great tribute here to someone obviously special...some cool imagery especially "tsunami of delights...well done
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Yes, Iggy, he is very special to moi. A true gem of a guy. lol Thank you. lol
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