Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

You Believe so, but it's not true

Have you ever thought you can
But never actually could
And thought you've seen it all
When the journey's only started
And said that you surely know your stuff
But you know you were lying.

Author notes

35 wors, not my best i guess it's kinda lame

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • DancingRed
    July 15, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    "And said that you surely know your stuff
    But you know you were lying"

    - Those last two lines are especially powerful. I like how there's three different images, worked into pairs of lines. I think there's more to this piece than first meets the eye.

    Thanks for entering.

    DancingRed.


  • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
    July 15, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    hm

    not lame at all I actually liked this especially compared to some of the other entries this is one of my favorites definately in my top 10 possibly in my top 5 <3