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Trust


Outstreched arms
search for purple blush
strewn in seperation

Sadly....
they drop
tears of spirits
as trust recovers from injury.







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Recovery of trust as love takes over expressed with purple blush meaning pain and tears of spirits that is rain!

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  • between slices
    July 4, 2007

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    i love the second part.. the first one seems kinda off... i mean, i get the image, but it's like two separate ideas..
    maybe cuz of the word "they" in the second part.. do you mean eyes drop the tears or the purple blush brushes away the tears? methinks the latter one..

    purple blush.. you're not thinking of using that are you?? PURPLE CONTEMPLATIONS...

    • phoenixonfire
      July 4, 2007
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      do ya even know what i am talking about dumbo...i am talking about rain....purple blush is pain..and the rain brings back trust..u didnt get the meaning..it sounds fine to me here!!


      • between slices
        July 4, 2007
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        OH........


        though i wonder.. i can't see any reference of RAIN here.. how do you expect me to understand your WEIRD thought trian??

        i doubt anyone else woulda thought of rain...
        too much deep thinking is hanikaarak!!

        • phoenixonfire
          July 4, 2007
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          Course there is

          the metaphor...tears of spirits..

          read the author notes


          • between slices
            July 4, 2007
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            ah.. people won't be able to recognise it without the notes..
            though interesting comparisons you make, for sure!

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