There but for two miles, go I
Accident of birth
Puts me at the barrel end
of your gun
A contest entry
- Quickie..prompt posted (Gold pays forward please) by KingofAllKings.
450 points, ended July 20, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i like the unique flair to this. congrats on the bronze
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yes it does say a lot, was going to say in just a few short words you invoked a lot of thinking
and now i can say that was very good and deserving of the recognition and will look at more of your work for now I have been intrigued. -
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thanks
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nice write
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pretty good
very powerful message here.
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Very intersting take on the prompt of the contest..beautifully done,great job my friend..
Amarige
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Wow, a very interesting take on the prompt. I like it! Glad to see you won a trophy for this, it's a unique piece that says a lot in just a few words. Very well done!
Rory
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