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Enemy

There but for two miles, go I
Accident of birth
Puts me at the barrel end
of your gun

A contest entry

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  • james119
    February 28
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    nice write

  • james119
    February 17
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    pretty good

    very powerful message here.


  • Amarige
    February 12
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    Very intersting take on the prompt of the contest..beautifully done,great job my friend..
    Amarige


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    November 23, 2007

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    Wow, a very interesting take on the prompt. I like it! Glad to see you won a trophy for this, it's a unique piece that says a lot in just a few words. Very well done!
    Rory

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