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[ Have you ever... ]

Have you ever...

told someone you were loyal
then forgotten them
in an instant.

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  • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
    July 15, 2007
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    Wow.

    This is my favorite. <3 I can definately relate to this and it's very powerful in few words.


  • DancingRed
    July 15, 2007

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    I don't know... I probably have.

    This piece is concise & powerful because of that. Perhaps some metaphors could have been added for extra spice, but this is already a lovely, sad poem.

    Thanks for entering

    DancingRed.


  • Isabel Cult
    July 4, 2007

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    Hey you're better than me already

    Love it


  • Exodus gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    This is beautiful
    A slight variation in this that reading this made me think of; "Have you ever told someone they were loved, then forgotten them in an instant".
    But I'm getting off topic, this is a sad, but stunning piece