Captivate
the quintessence
of my heart
as
I look deep into
your piercing eyes.
Enchanting my consciousness
By the exploit
Of
your animal magnetism.
Obsessively
needing
a
touch to your
lips and
skin
To your ravenous charms
I stride towards
a pang
of
impatient-ness
Characteristic
habits initiate
a
speeding ticket
for your plan
Dynamic stimulation
with a sip
of
wine
relinquishing our
permissiveness.
As for the morning
cooled
my heart more then
a winter
dominant love
frightened my
freedom
Author notes
we went with an abstract write~ it was a ton of fun ~ but a lot of work... Malicai - Collaborated with:Teddibly Abnormal
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- Round Three by Porcelain Princess.
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Comments
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Liked the speeding ticket, ravenous charms,and a
dominant love, very -word-worthy
well done
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Impatience is a word, as opposed to impatient-ness. You may want to switch that around. Otherwise, I like this.
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just a head's up
your user name goes in the authors box too~
i feel kind of vain applauding this poem but i'm applauding YOUR work, so it's not bad right?
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Nope not bad~ Thanks for the help
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