Niar
Icy bullets flash down from leaden eyes, stark slash of anger and sweet guttural roars of lust.
Author notes
Whis name do i out sweetie im confuusseedd
otion one!
and sorry i know i used a dirty word, forgive meee #puppy eyes#
A contest entry
- Green Apple Eyes and Kalidiscope Dreams by bird-mad girl.
1200 points, ended July 30, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lol you just put your user name in the author's notes. [thank goodness you're on my favorites or I wouldn't know who this was! ]
This was a great one liner! To bad you didn't come back sooner, my friend hosted a one liner contest and you probably would have won!
anywayzzzzzzz back to your one liner!
I loved this. There was a lot of imagery in this [which is hard to do because you only have so much to work with] and it was prefect. I like the moment you captured here. A storm, a crash of emotion. It was very rattling.
I'd love to quote all of the things I love in this but then I'd have to quote the whole thing! So we'll just leave at: I fucking love this, it's brilliant.
all my love
hnb xxx
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im glad you like it sweetiepie it was nice to not be pressured into elaborating further. though normally i like to write long long poems this is a little abstract for me and i like it
lovelovelovelove yyouuuuu
xXRXx
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