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40 years of monogamy

as she glides between
    sea of blood,
his catches hers

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  • Li snuffles
    December 14, 2007

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    Nice.. i like intriguing short reads.. that is like a cliff hanger always wanting more...

    talented write


  • Vbear
    September 27, 2007

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    very intriguing. i wish there was more. but obviously it wasnt meant to be longer... but still it makes me want to read more.


  • Zerstort
    September 12, 2007
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    It's sweet and leaves one thinking