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Stuck Together

Beautiful, Deadly
Painful, Sweet
Intense, Mystifying
Alone in deceit
I hate you
You to me
Yet here together we be.

A contest entry

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  • SensualWhispers
    July 6, 2007

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    OOO nice

    Very very nice. I love the flow and the twist on the end. I love the poem. It really flows nicely. I feel the emotions just come off the page. Excellent work and thanks for entering the contest. Kassie


  • Isabel Cult
    July 4, 2007
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    I like it. Especially "alone in deceit".

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