Striking clarity, resilient brilliance
Luminous beam
shot through confusion's thunderheads
Almost overwhelming, sweeping, washing
Absorbed by passive percipience
Settling smoothly.
Author notes
20 min impromptu "Pure Thought"
I'm not sure how 'poetic' this is, but these are my thoughts.
A contest entry
- Delightful Quickie 10/20/20 by delightfulmess.
425 points, ended July 3, 2007, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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20 penetrating words
pure beauty
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Wow I really liked this piece It was what I was looking for with this prompt Thank you for entering
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Wow, it's so faced paced and quick moving and then suddenly..."settling smoothly" creates an aura of calm and peace. Great write Best of luck! x
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This is an awesome poem. I like your expressions of a snapshot. I loved the descriptiveness. Enjoyed the read!!! Hope you do well in the contest!!!
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Well your prompt is pure thought or smooth ripples
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