Housed within a susceptible body
Which serves solely as a conduit
Torpid cage of muscle, tenuous frame of bones
Constantly aging and decaying
The soul propels action
Perpetual motion, motivation
Extending through eternity.
Boundless well of inspiration
Beneath the shallow physical
Cool honest swells of beauty
Weightless freedom, purity
Clockwork pith.
Being.
Tinder igniting curiosity
Perceives watercolor truth
Primal legislation
Inherent awareness of youth.
Floating,
Intangible,
Metaphysical
Essence.
Author notes
Entering a contest; I don't know how poetic this is, but this is how I perceive the soul.
Any thoughts are appreciated.
Comments
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This was a very interesting read. I thought it read well. I enjoyed the lines
"Tinder igniting curiosity
Perceives watercolor truth
Primal legislation
Inherent awareness of youth."
Keep up the good writing.
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Its very poetic and very thought provoking as well. I really enjoy your interpretation of the Soul, you've done an excellant job. So glad to have you in the contest. Best of luck! Kelly
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Makes for good poetry, in my eyes. Good luck in the contest.
Buddy
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