Feelings in my soul impart
Words trapped within my eyes
Lost inside a masked disguise
These very thoughts, I held true
A lingering moment, to wish, had stayed
But rainbows always seem to fade
Lost inside a masked disguise
Where a world of hope crashes down
As silent tears fall to the ground
But rainbows always seem to fade
Clouds strike the skies with rain
Hide the deep and inner pain
As silent tears fall to the ground
Feelings, my soul imparts
These very thoughts, I held true
Hear the whispers from my heart
Author notes
I stated a contest today using th phrase whispers of the heart. The phrase actually came after I wrote this earlier, feeling in a really bleh mood.
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A truly beautiful and poignant piece, Storm!
I hope you're feeling better soon, sweetie
This is lovely!!!
Much love,
Sandy -
I love you!
My darling, I'm so sorry that you have been feeling bleh. I think you're wonderful! the last two lines kind of struck me--the very thoughts you "held" true--hear the whispers from your heart--sorry, but it sounds contradictory--if they did hear the whispers from your heart wouldn't you still hold them true? Much love, and feel better dammit!!! john -
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John, you are right. Perhaps these whispers fall on deaf ears, making it harder to hold onto. Perhaps I should listen to it myself first.
Thank you hun, appreciate it.
Storm
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words of sorrow, my friend I know these feelings all to well, I feel your plea
amazing write from you
look to the sky, there are millions of miracles and know millions who are feeling the same way are looking at the same time
Michelle
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Thank you for the comments, much appreciated.
Have no idea what is wrong with me today. Was perfectly fine last night and this morning, and out of nowhere, I have been like a freaking waterfall tonight. Sigh.
Thanks again
Storm
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