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Addiction

    What would I be without these worlds
          Heavens to escape to
  On paper and silver/small screen
        Sucking me in with caffine as a lubricant

      Who would I be without these people
            Made up people who I call my friends
          My first love was a character to you
              Freedom and sanctuary for me

        Where would I be if I couldn't pretend
  That I was there with them
                  Risking my life to save the world
        Or more often- thrilling in destroying it


                    With a fictioned villain by my side...

Author notes

Using poetic license, I invented the word fictioned...

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  • Exodus gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    Where did all this brilliance come from?!
    Seriously babe, you must be on a writing roll because all of your pieces are absolutely amazingly stunning.
    Think I can borrow your muse? And maybe your talent...


  • Vashman
    July 4, 2007

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    o0o0 that last line gave me chills! you're writing is so great and really addictive... I can't write anything decent atm...


  • requiempoet gold member
    July 3, 2007

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    Wow. The last setence is almost chilling...that's so crazy! not that I don't like it, it's just frightening. Have you seen the movie Requiem for a dream?

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