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Fun Fun Fun!

Today I am happy,
want to know why?
I get to go to the amusement park,
and try out some rides!

I slip on my shoes
and squirt out some sunscreen.
Open the door and get ready
to burn off some steam!

Once I am there,
I sprint to the ticket booth.
500 tickets please.
Hey, it's not my loot!

Snack time for me
so I order some sweets.
Which kind to get?
How about some cotton candy!

Time to go home,
and I had a blast!
I hope to go there again
and spend some more cash!

Author notes

Pretty much describes me...I like to spend money (:

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  • Namita
    July 11, 2007
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    Ohh this is really nice - I'm sure Kiarna will liek this a lot. Keep it up!

    Luv,
    Candy

  • PoetryPuppy
    July 7, 2007
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    thank you for your poem Kiarna


  • tawk gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    What a wonderful write I know that Kiarna will love it and it will help smile too. I just loved it

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    Thank you for your cute poem to my daughter Kiarna, she appreciates you writing for her, and she likes to spend money too, mine of course hehehe, Josephine.