Oh Broken Angel of the night,
Your soul shall not be saved,
Lost within dark and wretched blight,
You live a life depraved.
Oh Dark Betrayer of the Truth,
An Angel without wings,
You've lost the innocence of youth,
And found what hatred brings.
Oh Harbinger of pain and strife,
Why must you now betray?
Your silence cuts just like a knife,
But naught is left to say.
Oh Vile Temptress bound within,
Take leave now of my soul,
No longer living in your sin,
I yearn to be made whole.
Oh Bringer of this Ancient Curse,
This pain is caused by you,
My agony has been made worse,
My soul is pierced clean through.
Oh Demon of the Darkest Powers,
Although I still resist,
Remaining in my darkest hours,
We're forced to coexist.
Oh Destroyer of all Beauty,
Your plague shall not subside,
For tis' your unholy duty,
To be always inside.
Author notes
Option one *(I CAN STILL REMEMBER JUST THE WAY YOU TASTE)*
A contest entry
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Beautiful. Just beautiful. THis is pure poetry right here.
Amazing job. Good luck in my contest. -
A very nicely written poem.. but unfortuanately you are among the many others who failed to follow my rules. Thank you for entering though..
}{aley -
Very nicely writen, it has a good flow to it.
Thankyou for takin gthe time to enter
Goodluck in the contest.
Much love,
Emily x -
Very nice write! It flows so well. Thanks for entering and great write!
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WOW. THIS IS SO POWERFUL!!
Oh Demon of the Darkest Powers,
Although I still resist,
Remaining in my darkest hours,
We're forced to coexist.
THIS IS AN EXCELLNENT WRITE. THANKS FOR ENTERING AND GOOD LUCK!! -
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Thank you. It was made of powerful hurt!
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I like how you start each stanza with a different title. It seems to renew the strength of your poem each time. This was a very powerful piece and, yes, Anne is definitely a broken angel.
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