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Go West

My side of the sky
Runs a raging red
Sun settles west, sky meets earth
A kiss of crimson lips

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A Naani

4 lines, 20-25 syllables.
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  • Not-The-Sun silver member
    July 6, 2007

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    nice write!! i usually don't write things that are a certain amount of lines, but i enjoy other people's poems a lot when they are in a special form <3


  • Aiyoris Maryian
    July 5, 2007

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    Wow, never heard of this form before. I LIKE IT! You do it justice. Thanks for the comment on my piece. Hope you're enjoying AP.


  • CyanideSun
    July 5, 2007

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    =] i like it!
    thanks for the comment. i see you're new on allpoetry... so welcome! hope you enjoy it!


  • Musical Renaissance
    July 3, 2007

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    Ah!! A new form, I see? Very good with the new format! All my poems are long, so its really hard for me to write a short poem, and you did a really good job at it!!

    ~*~Dawn~*~