"You know life is fragile when there is no light at the end of that long and lonely tunnel and you struggle just to exist"
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This is an anonymous contest so please do not use my name in comments and Good luck to all, you do have great contests Melodies, well done.
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A contest entry
- Maddening One-Liners "You know life is fragile when..." by Melodies.
475 points, ended July 4, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Yes, how true, dear poet person!
I do hope that we might find what we need today to keep us in one piece more or less. 
The days roll by so fast, though, I feel like I am on a conveyor belt going to somewhere... and I can only hope it is the good place. 
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I think that quite a few of us can relate to this one. Sometimes it seems that life seems to dish up more than our fair share of crap
Well done and best of luck in this contest 
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I can so relate to this write. I feel like you wrote it about me and my life. Such a powerful and full of strength write. Excellent and amazing! Good luck in the contest
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Powerful write. Thought provoking. Well said about life. We always hope for something more to life than just what we experience, but if this is all there is to life, the struggles to survive just to see another day, what a lonely existence it is. Good luck in the contest.
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