Babysitting used to be a
Thing of childhood dreams,
Holding young babies and
Getting worried when they'd scream.
When finally your parents let you
Take care of the gorgeous things
You'd think "where's the harm?"
In giving them a sweet something.
Who ever did know that baby would
Love chocolate as much as you?
But thankfully you were gone
When mamas face went blue!
For she found her child's present
Which covered almost everything,
This time the nappy did not stop
The effects of that sweet something.
Author notes
a2) Write a poem about an experience with chocolate.
Never give a baby chocolate, it's like pouring liquid through a seive.
(It's a contest entry, don't ask!)
The image is of the CUTE side of the catastrophe
A contest entry
- Weird Options Contest by Kimojuno.
456 points, ended July 12, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hilarious
Now this is just way too cute and it just cracke dme up. I know from being a kid chocolate induces hyperness and likewise nay pure sugar substance and you make an excellent point that you should not feed a baby chocolate LOL! any ways this is just a sweet well penned poem and I liked how you wrote it. keep up the good work as always
Signed, Paul 
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One word: Ew. Nicely written. Thank you for writing this AND entering the contest, I appreciate it more then you'll ever know.
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A cute poem. A cute picture of a baby.
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Cute poem.
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i babysit often, and i love this. thanks for submitting this!
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i actually find that photo creepy lol the child looks really evil and i find it rather scary lol. this poem itself i find rather amusing and something i will have to remember in the future lol, the imagery is a little bit weird and disgusting at the end but it goes with the contest really lol so i think a nice write for this contest better than my entries in its weirdness lol as it has a good flow and is something innocent with a hidden strong message inside it well done, i hope you do well in this contest like you deserve.
(I know this comment was a bit random, but was a bit bored and was interested by the name of the poem i think i regret it now but it was a good use of time, so thanks lol)
Seraph
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