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Good Day

Good Day



Through all the shit
Through all the bad times
Through all the separation and despair
We were only a phone call away

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An accent that would melt a stone heart

My heart

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Through all the scars
Through all the salty tears
Through all the desperation and despair
We were only a thought away

~

Blood-lust bound us

Darkness surrounded us

Progression stunned us

Tomorrow wont be our undoing

For we are as one

~

Through all the time
Through all the spoken words
Through all the separation and despair
We were only as far apart as we wanted to be

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The weatherbox isn't broken but unused

The special place left deserted for so long

Apparent betrayal by paranoia


Work ethic

Still cant feel you here

Even though your back

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Through all the pain
Through all the lonely times
Through all the suicidal tendencies
You were in my mind

three
little
words

See you in hell
We're damned together
What a good day that will be

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  • sky black
    July 26, 2007

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    wuhuu, you're finally back at this.
    and me likes... tis a bit dark and depressing, but sweetie, text me and ill come a-running, i may be a few hours late but ill get there!
    i love you bro, nowts gonna chnges that.
    ur lil sis
    sky xxx


  • Bride Of Hate
    July 4, 2007

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    I love you hon.

    You'll never be on your own =] i'm always here. We'll go and rule hell together one day, and turn it into a nice place



    LOVE YOU. x


  • bird-mad girl
    July 3, 2007

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    make sure that you and kitty come visit me there too. for I will be lonely without my brother and a beautiful beautiful chica.

    I loved this. I thought it was beautiful. in all honesty, it's one of those pieces that takes your breath away but violently because it has so much raw and energized emotion which is not to mention very overwhelming.

    I also really liked that this piece was overflowing with a lot of imagery. It was like a waterfall that kept getting heavier the further you went down.

    I love you bra
    hnb

    • Dr P
      July 4, 2007
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      Thankyou sah, i havent written in forever im glad you liked it though. love you too swee cheeks

      HNB

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