Tears of pain
Wash make-up free
From my face
Anger rolls
Through my body
To my hands
Fingers search
My body looking
For the pills
I slip them
quietly and gently
into my opened mouth
Wash them down
With the help of
Whiskey and beer
Body limp
Tears dried
Soul released
Author notes
It's scary how easy this was to write...
A contest entry
- Deep Dark Thoughts by Abstract Image.
330 points, ended August 11, 2007, 57 entries
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Comments
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wow this poem was so strong in so little words but in a sad way...just like i like it...good luck.
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Very Good Poem
Been there , done that. Tried a couple of times but failed!~ Guess I did'n try hard enough. Great insight!
"BOO"
(Thanks for the comment on poem on love)
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yeah, it is scary how easy it is to imagine. the important thing is that we don't give in.
I think it helps to let the feelings out... on paper, without actually PLANNING anything or whatever...
thanks for entering my contest
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