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I Love A God

That copper hair atop your head

Or maybe that cold white skin

For all I know I love a god but for he I love within

You love me though I don't understand

That someone of your beauty why did you pick me

I love you

For all I know I love a god but for he I love within

I want to be with you forever

But I age and you do not

Will you still love me when I grow old 

For all I know I love a god but for he I love within

You picked a mortal and not one of your own

For all I know I love a god but for he I love within 

 

 

 

 

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This was just a small poem I and spark in my mind but I think it is not very good tell me the truth and I don't care if it is brutal just tell

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  • riasme
    July 3, 2007

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    this is sweet!! yay small sparks. that's what always gets me is those little boing!s in your mind...that's where i get most of my poems. tis sweet. see ya

    Lise