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First Date / A night to remember (Adult)

The date was over, the night was through,
I'd driven you home, I wanted to screw.
Inviting me in, I couldn't get out fast enough,
keeping my hands to myself, would sure be tough.
Sat on the couch while you went to change,
had to reach down my pants to re-arrange.
Was already half stiff with lustful desire,
everything about you set my body afire.
You returned to the room, my mouth hit the floor,
stood there in black leather, silhouette in the door.
Cock instantly at attention, pants were too tight,
was positive then, this would be one hell of a night.

You walked seductively over, licking ruby red lips,
running hands down your cleavage, swaying your hips.
My eyes opened wide when you dropped to your knees,
first unzipping my pants, then you started to tease.
Licking very lightly, running tongue up my shaft,
fondling my balls, you certainly knew your craft.
Hand between your own legs, fingering yourself,
I thanked God in the heavens for this sexual elf.
Pulling off my pants, quickly removed my shirt,
wanted to have you for tonights dessert.
Reaching out to you,I rubbed on a breast,
swallowing me whole, pleasure was expressed.
I gasped as you took me all the way down your throat,
reached between your legs,rubbed the man in the boat.

My aching cock wanted to be all up inside you,
you were too busy treating it like a kazoo.
Finally I just couldn't stand it anymore,
pulled you up on me, my personal whore.
Slowly I entered you, let out a low moan
twisting your hips on my blood engorged bone.
Grinding,bucking,rode me hard and fast as you could,
grabbed your ass cheeks, pulled you hard onto my wood.
Lips finding mine, our tongues did the love dance,
we knocked over a lamp, didn't give it a glance.
We were both going to cum, I could feel it inside,
good god did I love this, what a fantastic ride.
Throwing back your head, screaming in pure pleasure,
I came deep inside your wet, hot, silky treasure.
Jumping and twitching you milked my cock dry,
I thought to myself, Damn I'm one lucky guy.



 





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  • Childofserenity
    August 20, 2008
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    nice erotic poem. thanks for entering.


  • darell
    July 18, 2007

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    Beastly Fantastic!

    Yesss man yesss! This what makes greatness.
    This was a fucking fantastic write.
    It gave me a boner like you wouldn't believe.
    I want to re-inact every word of this scorching
    hot piece. Damn you're a winner in my book. Bravo!


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 13, 2007

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    Congrats on the Bronze
    Love, Lane


  • patsoldcat
    July 12, 2007

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    great

    always nice to meet a woman that is my equal and sometimes more in openness and free with desires
    knowing what she wants and taking it. you are luck for sure for she gave you what you wanted, but perhaps it was just for her pleasure.


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 6, 2007
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    well, this certainly woke me up
    after a long leisurely lunch....

    My poem seems like milk toast compared
    to this...lol....You did a great job
    combining humor and sexuality - a winning
    combination in my book

    Love, Lane


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 4, 2007
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    WOW.................

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