You know life is fragile when your heart walks out the door.
A contest entry
- Maddening One-Liners "You know life is fragile when..." by Melodies.
475 points, ended July 4, 2007, 23 entries
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man.. ur poetry has moved me by and by.. how meaning ful and powerful this line was..! Just feels in the core..right beannth the flesh
Amazing..
how beautiful! i thought it could be
the infinite it admires, as much as i see
the look when realised the slam of the door, i know how difficult it grew to breathe..
i couldnt stop writing u this lil poetry to this line! ur an amazing poet!!
God bless ya!
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Wow, so powerfully moving. Nicely done! This one just hit me hard. Good luck!
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Oh, and we must be so careful of that, for sometimes it does not take much for our hearts to just do what you say.
A good and true line, poet! 
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talk about a weeping moment... sadly beautiful.
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beautiful
So wonderful! having lost my heart more times than I can count I really felt this piece! Much love, john
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true..good luck
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aww, so true, i agree... and keep on walking! great write and good luck in the contest.. this should place
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