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Morning
sun breaking low
backlit clouds golden rays
mountains yield to early warming
dewy pastures provide breakfast table
wildlife waking springtime harvest
natures bounty teeming
daystar zenith
morning
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Author notes
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A contest entry
- Sunrises and Sunsets by PureCountry.
875 points, ended September 9, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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First Let Me Say
I loved the picture accompanying the poem. While here in Southeast Texas, we do not have mountains, I could relate very much to the rest of the poem. Specially "dewy pastures provide breakfast table". A short, simplistic, yet equally powerful poetic offering. Many thanks for sharing, Good Luck.
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Beautifully done write, showing the intensity of a sunrise beeming with life against the sky. Well done in form and imagery, thanks for entering into the contest.
Mouser -
Very beautiful picture of the morning. A great write.
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Very beautiful and great write.
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great
Great piece from a very observant persona. I love its truth, Mum, u have come out of age. This is great, Keep this up. I love it. Son
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Beautifully written Sue, i see your trying to get an award from my RL brother David, this is a wonderful go at it, best of luck...Scott
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Hmmm, counted a few times and used a syllable counter and still get seven syllables on line 4. Hope that doesn't ruin the great layout you have achieved but it will need editing. Thanks for entering.
Mouser -
backlit clouds...
This is excellent! Great structure and lovely imagery...
Good luck in the contest!
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Very beautiful written. I love this, too.
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Brilliant PIece
I love this. I love the layout. Wonderful words. Lots of strong imagery in this short piece. It really stands out. Actually reminds me of a bowl of cereal, laid out on the breakfast table. Wonderful words, laid out to read, instead of eat.
Another brilliant one, Sue.
Well done
Wayne
xxx
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