You know life is fragile when all that once held it together, now lies shattered like an old window pane on the floor of a broken down house.
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- Maddening One-Liners "You know life is fragile when..." by Melodies.
475 points, ended July 4, 2007, 23 entries
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hoodwinked
This quote expresses a lot. It's extremely meaningful and so truthful. You've done an amazing job!
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Hood-wink mwhahahahaa
How very true!
I definently feel this one. Life is so very fragile yet so strong at times. It is a confusing thing - life.
Well done..
I noticed you always have a very intriguing image with your work (at least so far). It's very interesting. -
Hood-Wink!
What a powerful piece!! And so true to life experiences
I so loved this write. Amazing
You have just been Hood-Winked
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YIKES!! Very poetic!
Ah, the imagery here is profound and I am saying "how true and fine!" 
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sad. but good!
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WOW!
Very powerful! I've got broken panes strewn across my soul!
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This certainly is truthful, I've been to this place but I know people who have and it's a devastating feeling to watch someone lose just about everything plus the will to live. It's given me shivers.
Vonnie
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humm,,, great imagery very deep and reall
KayDee
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I loved this poem. the briefness of it makes it very perfound. it is also very true hope none of your readers will have to experence this very nice write.
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