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After the Show

Sun drops like a curtian drawn
Show is over, and they've all gone
Behind the scenes, my costume shed
Melted sweat, face is red
Back of hand sticks to skin
As I wipe 'way the heat again
Undone, uncovered, but not quite through
Waiting outside, my last fan, You





After everyone has gone home,

Author notes

The people in our lives who hang around "After the Show" are the ones you will never leave us hanging. They are blessings. They are love.

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  • They Say Shannon
    July 5, 2007
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    This is wonderful.

    The meaning is lovely.
    This is a great piece,
    Nice job! <3


  • primadonnah
    July 4, 2007

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    i love this...
    poems with a theme always beat those that are just a list of feelings