A kiss that can change it all,
A kiss that can make you fall,
Fall in love…
Filled with love and passion, our hearts gave birth to a kiss,
Two tender lips met and the moment was full of bliss.
A burning sensation followed by a little giggle,
Love was the solution to this riddle.
It being the first, my heart was compelled to burst,
Now I wonder why nothing else can quench my thirst?
In grief or in sting, in worry or in a quandary,
I relive the elation and get reasons to breathe.
A kiss of all time is the first kiss ever,
Emotions run wild making you wish it lasted forever.
Like a thing that can take away all the pain,
Like a thing that can soothe your troubled brain.
A thing never forgotten or failed to remember,
Even if it is the first, it will make you shed a tear!
“No feeling of delight can ever take it’s place,
Turning out to be the first and last, it left a huge trace.”
A kiss that can change it all,
A kiss that can make you fall,
Fall in love…
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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That first real kiss from one soul to the other is is so special, with a woman it remains in the heart and mind forever, every kiss is measured by it, wonderful work.
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THAT FIRST KISS!!!!
Ones very first kiss with their hearts desire stays in their memory forever. It is indeed so special.
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nice and that is how a kiss makes you feel
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wow that is some really good wirting.... it make me think about all of my kisses....
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There are no words to express your 'writing' expertise.
I simply am drawn in...'a think never forgotten or failed to remember...? Sounds like a double negative..but really....what do I care..I enjoyed this as much as the previous one I read of yours.
Peace
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oh, what a sweet sweet poem...
I needed to read something as
beautiful as this...thank you.
Love, Lane
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A kiss can do a lot as you have said here. this is beautiful and well written.
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I loved this...
absolutely Beautiful
ephiphany
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this is so beautiful your a truly great poet
love
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beautiful
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KNOW THE FEELING xD I really like this. It rhymes! It's so rare I like a rhyming poem... lol
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How True
Sometimes it doesn't even take a kiss...
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i thought this was a good poem. i like it alot and i can relate to it in many ways. good job keeep up the good work.
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aw wow this is really sweet. it made me smile :]]. it has a lot of feeling. luvd it.
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This is a sweet,beautiful,well written poem. Makes me reflect on so many of mine,and yes there are many
You see as a woman,there are phases...and we cherish each one like a treasure. Each kiss (especially that first) means everything. This made me smile and have many,may flashbacks!! 
Thanks for the trip.
~Deena
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This is so beautiful! It made me want to cry! i SMILED HUGELY!
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This is fabulous!
This piece actually brings about great feelings. "A kiss of all time is the first kiss ever" is a wonderful way to put it!
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Wow
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this is sweet
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You write Beautiful Poetry.
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This was amazing, and really captured a feelings of a kiss well. I loved the lines:
A kiss that can change it all,
A kiss that can make you fall,
Fall in love...
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again, amazing.
you seem to know how to capture emotions really well.
another thing thats great about this, is its just one little moment in time, but you can make it last forever..
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Another beautiful write from you, written with such a tender and delicate pen. You surely know how to express yourself with great imagery. Excellent penning.
Shaz xx
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"A kiss that can change it all,
A kiss that can make you fall,
Fall in love…"
Perfectly lovely! Nothing quite like sweet kisses!
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so...you're suggesting that if first kisses are usually first loves?
I love the poem...put I'm sort of puzzled about that.
I think that my 1st kiss was my 1st love...but, OH WELL
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look at all thee comments!
damn!
hah you're amazing, seriously. And the fact that you're a guy writing about poetry is something amazing in itself, I love how your words all flow so nicely when I try to write love poems everything looks like a huge car crash >.<
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You achieved a beautiful thing by being able to put what a lot of people have trouble wording into such eloquent words. Was this kiss one you were a part of? (I just ask because the way you wrote it, it seems like there was a first-hand experience involved). If there wasn't, kudos to you for giving that sense. I look forward to more of your stuff.
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so true
this is a realy good poem i like it a lot keep up the good wrok
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I really like this. your writing is so great. keep up the good work.
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:-) Re-read this a couple times since I got your message.
I love this! It's sweet and romantic but yet it speaks of something I've been thinking a lot about lately: Love! It sings of love and your use of similies enhances an already beautifully descriptive piece, "like a thing that can take away all the pain".
The kiss of true love really does take away all the pain. But it adds a different kind of sting... the sudden realisation that you need that kiss.
Don't stop writing.
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WOW...........i not sure wat 2 say but.......WOW
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Oh my gosh. This is just beautiful. Oh wow. I love it. I'm going to add this to my favorites, if it's ok with you. Can I print it?
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EXCELLENT !!!
You are so gentle. I am glad you invited me to read your precious pens. So charming.
God's touch
Jeri -
This pooem captures the moment well. I liked this. A good poem...
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good.
i think its cute.. i love it..
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This is really beautiful...so much feeling in it I look forward to reading more of your work
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awesome
awesome. i loved it.
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perfect
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awsome
i loved how you wrote this piece, it was very interesting, and so much like my life, great write
dar-crys
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AWESOME
Love is so powerful I can relate to this poem you hit a home run
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I love this poem my favorite line, " A kiss that can change it all,
A kiss that can make you fall,
Fall in love…" That's beautiful great poem keep it up.
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beautifully written
the repetition of the first stanza at the end really brought it all together. the poem was amazing, and it was a beautiful way to describe the meaning of a first kiss to ones heart. you dont seem new to me. youve been here for awhile and you have 100 comments on this poem alone. from what i can tell youre a great writer.
Kelcey
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again nice structure in this poem,
the first and last stanzas being repeated highlight the lines which just made me think.
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this is a good poem i liked it it made me think of the first time i kissed my boyfriend tyler i love him alot but yea this is a good poem
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this is a sweet poem. full of excitement
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really sweet. I thought it was great. Just one little pinpoint suggestion that I may throw out to you...Why not make it "I relive the elation and find reasons to breathe." I usually find the word "get" doesn't normally fit as well as some other word. But it's your poem, and it's great.
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Brilliant
Great emotion, great words, flow was absolutely fantastic, intelligent write. Just amazing!
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Great
Oh my... this is truly a wonderful piece of poetry.
The diction flowed so right from word to word, line to line.
Your rhyming scheme is impressive with bother internal and end rhymes.
The message .... it just seemed so unreal not in a bad way but a terrific way..........
You have truly created a profound write, magnificent.
well done
tender-butterfly
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awwhh that was cute and SO true! Great job!
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godd emotions, very powerful words. i really enjoyed reading this
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Great Poem
This poem just mad me smile, wow is such a good poem.
I loved the 2nd paragraph how it describe such a great feeling.
This poem does do a great job on describing a good feelin.
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wow great poem... a kiss is powerful... and it looks like you enjoyed your first kiss
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This was so good, very beautiful and passionate...........................
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love it
dude your really good i'm loving every write so far keep it up
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wow
all your pieces are amazing!!!
it has so much passion in them!!!
i love it
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Nicely written, straight from the heart, a feeling everyone feels in sometime in life.
Like a thing that can soothe your troubled brain.
<--loved this line.
Great write.
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Awww...*remembers first kiss* hmmm...yours was better than mine by the looks of it... But seriously, this made me feel the equivalent of classic warm and gooey...It's both beautiful and heartfelt. Keep up the good work!
~Avan~
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"A kiss that can change it all,
A kiss that can make you fall,
Fall in love…"
Omg! this is fantastic the rhyme is perfect and the words are well very seductive and romantic I found myself reading it twice I like the connectives that you used in every verse. you chose a word and you linked the theme with enjamberment it is fantastic this is the best poem I have ever read. wow
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This is really sweet and cute. I love it. Kisses do have so much emotional power, my first one really didn't though...but anyway great job on capturing those feelings. You do always remember a good kiss. I love this.
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"It being the first, my heart was compelled to burst,
Now I wonder why nothing else can quench my thirst?
In grief or in sting, in worry or in a quandary,
I relive the elation and get reasons to breathe."....your words have brought me back to the days when I felt that way, when kisses were more important to my life than even food...with joy, I might add...thank you for reminder
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Your poem makes me smile for you capture the moment so very well with your words. I am so happy to meet a good poet today on AP. A hearty welcome to you! I like the rhymes, the rhythm, the imagery and the flow of your poem, and, the repetitive lines too.
Charishma
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Holds a lyrical feel, Words dancing and leading us on a litte journey, wonderful piece, warms the heart
I can see why it has been so popular! ~tia
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What a piece, it's not to often that pieces about love grabb me like this, wow. You really made me feel, and think about my love, also my first love. This poem is so filled with emotions, the words used so well. You make the structure work, and I really like that you repete the first lines in the end. Good lines. Keep on the good work! And welcome to AP!
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I like it. It's pretty cute.
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The ryhming in this is alittle funny.. like little giggle.. heh it was still good!
Fire Angel -
wow
awesome dolly
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Everyone loves a good love poem! And we all love yours!Good job. You always remember a good kiss. I also like the rhyming.
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I see love poems are your thing. Personally I like reading love poems... because everyone has been through different experiences, and have different points of view on the subject. You're pretty good man. Keep at it.
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aww! this is adorable! seriously! wow, you have quite the talent for writing here.. great job, keep it up amo!!
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OMG i loved this it litterally took my breathe away.
this is amazing and so true.
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HOLY GOSH!
wow my first impression was oh kinky...then it became sweet and so oh so romantic and fafilling...nice job keep it up!
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Once again this was really sweet...the first kiss is always lovely[unless the guy is a bad kisser :0 ]
Anways this was nice and had a great rhyme pattern
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ITS TRUE!
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This is cute...
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Ahhh....So Nice!
A kiss that does this to anyone is absolutely perfect! Nice!!!
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Awesome
wow yet again i really liked this one. the whole theme being a kiss is great. the only way to get a oint across is keep going with it and not go off on something different. i loved it. the same girl that i am not with has pretty much done this to me...
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i like this... a kiss can make you fall... very har at times, but i dont think it has to be the very first kiss. mine wasnt the first kiss, just the first one from a certain person. i suppose that if you have to wait for 5 years to get the kiss that you truely want... lol. anyways. this is a great write! i really like it! i love it actually.
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Wow
You are a very talented writer, great word usage, nice flow, good imagery, heart felt,..Ilove this
"A kiss that can change it all,
A kiss that can make you fall,
Fall in love…"
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hey, welcome to allpoetry, your an amazing poet. so all i have to say is wow! this is really great! it really made me feel a lot of emotion. well written.
~gracing~
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I prefer this to the previous poem, I think it is much better written.
I love the repition of the first and last verse, especially the open ending of hte last lines in each - very effective.
I like the rhyme, it keeps the poem flowing, but you might want to work on not making it sound quite so forced. It seems a bit stilted in places.
Once again, good vocabulary. I liked this one.
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I loved this, it's beautifully written and the emotion was great. Very well done!
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this is really good
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aah yes the kiss tells all! with one kiss I can tell so much aobut the guy! I really liked this alot.........A kiss of all time is the first kiss ever,
Emotions run wild making you wish it lasted forever.
Like a thing that can take away all the pain,
Like a thing that can soothe your troubled brain.
good poem kee up the good writes..........
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i like this. its really very good
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this is really good! i like the emotion in this poem!
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Beautiful!
Absolutely loved it. I know plenty of people who HATE rhyming but I happen to love it. Very awesome, tells a beautiful story ^.^
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i can tell that you really meant what you wrote. Keep up the good work.
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nice. very sweet.
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I think you have a natural nick for writing you alway write poems from the heart.that is what I like about your write. I like poem from the heart and i like true emotion. Good job,
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This.. this was amazing! I loveee it so so much. Made my heart skip a few beats while reading it. It was just so perfect in so many ways. It flowed great and the wording of it all was brillant. You have so so so much talent!
A kiss that can change it all,
A kiss that can make you fall,
Fall in love...
I loveeed those lines SO much. It was just perfect. Amazingly, fantasticly perfect! It was just so beautiful to read and you wrote is spectacularly. The heartfelt emotions really came out in the poem and it was felt by my heart. The emotion of love was amazing in the poem. Really really well writen.
Kepp using that talent of yours, don't waste it!
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GOOD THOUGHTS
Good thoughts I basicly write rhyme so my form of poetry is a bit different, let's see, your ideas are great, you just have to figure a way to consistantly relay them in a flowing motion,I'll try"
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THE POWER OF A KISS"
The power of a kiss
Can change it all.
The evil of a kiss
Can make you fall!
When two lips touch
They're full of bliss.
Oh the great power
OF A KISS!
The sensatiol that follows
Gives a giggle.
Loves the "SOLUTION"
To this riddle,
With this being the first
My heart nearly burst!
Now nothing else in this world
Can quince this thirst!
BY romil-z
That's how I would do it in rhyme,you may not like rhyme so there are other ways as well! I'll look at some others and yell back if you like.
"BOO"
2 ON THE THOUGHT lots of different forms together!
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It being the first, my heart was compelled to burst,
Now I wonder why nothing else can quench my thirst?
In grief or in sting, in worry or in a quandary,
I relive the elation and get reasons to breathe.
Great rhyme there. Really.
I love this form thats..
Rhyme.. and prose.
and everything combined.
Its nice.
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Very nice
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really nice rhyming! I love this writing and the visual of the kiss.again you have done a great job here,keep up the good work!!!
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"A burning sensation followed by a little giggle,
Love was the solution to this riddle."
That's my favorite line, it made me smile and it brought back memories. I liked the repeated stanza at the end...It was really sweet and brought back [good] memories. Kudos, this is a beautiful write.
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Wow, this is really sweet.I think am in love with ur writing, so much emotion in this piece, and ver beautiful expressions.I love it!
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this is my favorite it's flippen awesome
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This is indeed a wonderful piece!! The imagery is great and I love this part,
"A kiss that can change it all,
A kiss that can make you fall,
Fall in love…"
Love it!!
Keep it yup!!
Luv,
Candy
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