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Unseeding

Panties peeled
bent in grace
pull my star fruit
close to your face
taste it's fruity
juicy zest
chew the star
and lick the rest
mouth sweet and ripe
lips perched and pressed
tongue looms closer
on star it rests
tickles intimately
inside my fruit
the core shudders
quietly acute
leave me with
pleasures so unneeding
as you swallow
my star fruit's unseeding

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  • buttheadsloon
    July 19, 2007
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    A creative erotic write with some great lines ... "taste it's fruity juicy zest".


  • B Chandler
    July 3, 2007
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    which fruit otherwise this write is null and void ma'am