Grapes, de-vined,
twisted, coiled
smashed beneath feet
Open head: Insert Spirit
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie, 15 minutes, 10 entries, 20 Words. Beat The Clock! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended July 3, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - an unexpected place to put quickie prewrites by DancingRed.
300 points, ended July 9, 2007, 28 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
Very skillful and powerful for a short poem. Congrats on the trophy.
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Wow. A spectacular piece. Each word is powerful and potent.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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What a total hoot! I lost my complete edit!!! Had something really nice going. Rhymes and everything. Everyone seems to have read this "do not read" version, so I guess I'll have to go with it.
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OMG!!
You have me hooting over here
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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lol, loved the last line, dang these are all so good
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Wow. Interesting piece you've written. Laughed at the last part. Great job.
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Your Prompt is:"I need a lobotomy or a bottle in front of me!"
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Good luck.
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