Suffering mind
of moonshine madness,
the deliberate descent
to destruction.
I need another drink
like another hole in my head.
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Your Prompt is:"I need a lobotomy or a bottle in front of me!"
20 words
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- Quickie, 15 minutes, 10 entries, 20 Words. Beat The Clock! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended July 3, 2007, 8 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol, made me laugh...loved it.
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lol, loved it, these are such wonderful takes on the prompt
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Wow. Forceful last lines. I liked it...seemed pretty brutal. Great job indeed.
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Your Prompt is:"I need a lobotomy or a bottle in front of me!"
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Good luck.
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